Monday, May 3, 2010

When the world comes down

It was the moment I have been waiting for. I registered and waited at the waiting room. The sound of the clock ticking made my heart beat faster. A lady called my name. I was brought to another room. I was sweating all over even though the placed was air conditioned. I walked in the door with my books tightly under my arms. I said , "Good morning, Sir" and turned on the best smile i could do. On the way in, I accidentally dropped my books. The man asked me whether I needed help. I quickly answered no and picked up the books. I sat on the unbalanced chair. The chair made squeeky sounds. The man said, "Start whenever you are ready". I opened the book and slowly placed my hand on the keys. My heart dropped to the floor when I played the first note wrongly. I kept going and rushed through so it would end faster. Once I finished, I took my books and ran off without saying a word. I rushed out of the building and ran to my mom. I burst out of tears. I made her whole new shirt wet. I went back with disappointment.

Two months later, a mail came to my house with my name on it. I took it to my room and locked the room. Before I opened it, I started crying and said that there will be no more hope. I teared the envelope open. I shouted so loudly that my mom something bad happened. I managed to pass my piano exam. From that day onwards, I was a mentally ill kid.


With love :)
PS: I wrote that for my English exam :D EXCEPT THE LAST SENTENCE heehee :D

please fix any grammar mistakes. i made lots of it. im too lazy to read it again.

5 comments:

  1. It was the moment I HAD been waiting for. I registered and waited at the waiting room. The sound of the clock ticking made my heart beat faster. A lady called my name. I was brought to another room. I was sweating all over even though the placed was air conditioned. I walked in the door with my books tightly under my arms. I said , "Good morning, Sir" and turned on the best smile i could. On the way in, I accidentally dropped my books. The man asked me whether I needed help. I quickly answered no and picked up the books. I sat on the unbalanced chair. The chair made squeeky sounds. The man said, "Start whenever you are ready". I opened the book and slowly placed my hand on the keys. My heart dropped to the floor when I played the first note wrongly. I kept going and rushed through so it would end faster. Once I finished, I took my books and ran off without saying a word. I rushed out of the building and ran to my mom. I burst INTO tears. I made her whole new shirt wet. I went back with disappointment.

    Two months later, a mail(?) came to my house with my name on it. I took it to my room and locked the room. Before I opened it, I started crying and said that there will be no more hope. I TORE the envelope open. I shouted so loudly that my mom something bad happened. I managed to pass my piano exam. (From that day onwards, I was a mentally ill kid. = O.O lol)

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  2. OMG JUST EDIT IT FOR ME. please and thank you :D my english is terrible :D

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  3. Lol. I can't. Unless I log in with ur account. :P

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  4. yes you can. oh wait you cant? -_- zomg. i shall just leave it in broken english then :D

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